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I would like to write a relationship novel and need your feedback!

I once again broke things off with my boyfriend who I recently discovered was narcissist. This explains so much over the last 7 years, as we were on again off again and so on. I want to write a book about my experience but in a novel form. Please let me know if you would be interested in reading such a book?

Here's some more info I put together recently:

A young woman’s struggle with her emotionally abusive boyfriend

Candice loved her boyfriend and wanted to please him and feel secure with him. For seven years, the struggle to achieve a loving relationship continued to mount and become more intense until one day Candice had the breakthrough of her life. It freed her spirits immensely but she felt lost and confused afterwards. Will Candice be able to regain her life and find love again?

I have written a first bit if anyone is interested in reading it and giving me some feedback on it.

Thank you!

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Posted August 7, 2009

Sounds like great material for an awesome novel!
Would be happy to help.

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Qverb
QverbTakenRugburns, sarcasm, giggling, beautiful
Posted July 29, 2009

I can see there being a market for this. I'd be interested in seeing what you have so far. Black Iris might also be interested since she is an aspiring writer and leaves a lot of comments all over here as well. Shoot it over and I'll be happy to give my 2 cents.

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oldgringo
oldgringoStarting OverContinuing my search
Posted July 28, 2009

Perhaps a self-help short story...but a whole novel? I struggled through an emotionally abusive relationship thinking that as she felt more secure, her attitude would mellow. It didn't happen and I walked away from the life we were planning. I will never invest that much time in a relationship with such low lows, even though the highs were extremely high.

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